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I need everyone opinion about my web design. I have a hard time passing though quality control on a WebDesign selling site.. And yea i got rejected about 10 times. But whats is driving me nuts is that they don't tell you whats wrong, what you should correct etc.. All of the reviewers just say: "This File Did Not Meet Our Criteria" And that sentence is driving me nuts 8O
Anyway heres the latest design witch was rejected.
http://img39.imageshack.us/my.php?image=steelv2.jpg (its for security business)
P.S Please be honest .

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Post by 3XTORTION »

Well its good but not excellent tbh. :?

Pros:
-Dark Red is *thumb*
-The header is very nice(The steel img specially)

Cons:
-Its simple still needs more work

Overall : I would give it a 7/10 :D

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Macross! You built that?

I personally think it looks great very smooth.... Would you be into doing some jobs on occasion for me and thugs? Were having a hard time finding a designer :-)

Contact me via PM *cheers man

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Post by ph0bYx »

I like it too!
Maybe change the background color of the post to a little bit darker color..

Mab! You know you can always ask me to help you with graphics design, I would likely do it, now since I have a few days off from school..

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Post by lilrofl »

It might just be my box, but the testimonials box looks to be sized wrong, as the top one cuts security services off a few letters.

Other then that, I like it a lot. It's simple, easy to read and contains all the relivent informations.

Good work IMO.

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Post by Macross »

Thank you all for honest reply's i will try to correct my mistakes.
Edit: Ok iv'e redesigned some parts of this layout here's the version 2.0

http://img30.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homepage.jpg

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I really like it.... :D the only thing that could maybe be improved a little is the hover effect, but that's hard to say without seeing the effect at work.... :) :)

well done! :)

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Good work buddy........... Pm Mabs if ya want some work :wink:
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Post by Macross »

Oh well layout v2 got rejected again. That's enough im not going to submit another template to that site... And when you think about it they would probabilly sell it for 1-5$ lol.
Thank you all for your opinions!

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Post by 3XTORTION »

Too bad, but why dont u download a template from template monster and edit it a bit...They have amazing themes :D and if ur good at flash u can rip the template directly from the site :wink:

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