My first flyer

Post by **computathug** » 02 Oct 2009, 07:17

Never been bothered with gfx before but now i am having to or spend money..... i would prefer to do it my self so here is my first attempt

n3rd · Post by **n3rd** » 02 Oct 2009, 08:37

Im not sure....its not really that appealing to me (no offense intended) but its just not.....sexy enough to draw my attention. Also I would leave out cyber in an ad

Post by **DNR** » 02 Oct 2009, 08:48

I think it looks good - the wording is fine - right on target. The information is clear and easy to comprehend.

The problem I have is the image of the girl is almost lost in the black back ground. The words over her buttocks should be raised or lowered. I guess my first instincts was to check out her butt - but it was blocked by letters!

Even if you do nothing - you still have a great poster!

DNR

Post by **bad_brain** » 02 Oct 2009, 09:40

looks good, well done!

the only thing that I would edit is the background pic....it would be better if it would go through the whole flyer, right now it's kinda cut off which is a little bad, especially on the bottom where you can't see the high heels that way.
and well, high heels are some kind of "trademark" in that scene imo..

and maybe "darkest desires halloween special" should stand a little more in the front, maybe a "bleeding" font would match good...have a look here:
http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=110

Post by **computathug** » 03 Oct 2009, 06:42

cheers guys. I will have another play around with this and see if i can make any improvements as i have till monday to get this perfect before it goes to the printers.

Thanks for the link too b_b

Post by **computathug** » 24 Oct 2009, 10:47

*bump*

Well its less than a week away now and here is the flyer that i have finally settled for which i have done myself.

What do you guys think of it....I think its better than the other one above anyway.

Post by **bad_brain** » 24 Oct 2009, 13:18

ahhhh...MUCH better man! looks like a trashy 70's underground porn movie cover (that's a compliment), fits good to that scene...

for inspiration have a look at the "Cramps" collector site:
http://www.cramps.de/
(RIP Lux Interior, didn't knew he passed away this year)

a good example:

as you see there is much similarity to yours...notice how they display the date/location (the most important info imo)...